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Posted by Geraldine in Haiku Reflections, Personal Growth, Seeking Answers. Tagged: haiku poetry, Haiku Reflections, osi, thinking. 30 Comments
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Posted by SandyCarlson on July 11, 2009 at 11:49 pm
The circular movement of this is clear and complete and mysterious. Lovely.
Posted by shraddha on July 12, 2009 at 12:19 am
really really cool
Posted by lissa on July 12, 2009 at 12:50 am
nice, very dreamy
Posted by Joe on July 12, 2009 at 4:32 am
This makes me feel so peaceful. Love the photo and the words.
Posted by gautami tripathy on July 12, 2009 at 4:32 am
Seems kind of magical..
that thin line
Posted by Jim on July 12, 2009 at 4:35 am
Geraldine, this is precious. I have a YouTube (not released yet) showing fish swiming lazily around in the pond, in circles. Your haiku reminded me of the way I felt that day. Until I realized that I should take a video. Great!
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Posted by Jim on July 12, 2009 at 5:01 am
Yes. No, the last parts were suggestions of conclusions to my poem that I decided to air. For sure the second one was not true in that my love had died. However a divorce can be just about as rough on a person. My word is that I was experimenting and hastily decided on pushing the ‘publish’ button.
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Posted by anthonynorth on July 12, 2009 at 7:30 am
I love the image in these words, bringing them to life.
Posted by Edward S. Gault on July 12, 2009 at 7:38 am
Very Reflective!
Posted by Fledgling Poet on July 12, 2009 at 12:19 pm
This evoked such wonderful imagery…lovely!
Posted by Maggie on July 12, 2009 at 3:02 pm
Love the images with thoughts and photo
Posted by Nathalie (Spacedlaw) on July 12, 2009 at 3:27 pm
Love this cool poetry.
Posted by patois on July 12, 2009 at 7:44 pm
Bravo! Love the photo and the thoughts. “Thinking summer thoughts” is spot on.
Posted by sue on July 12, 2009 at 8:52 pm
what a lovely invitation to take a wade in the cool cool waters.
Posted by naramalone on July 12, 2009 at 9:11 pm
Such serenity.
Posted by Geraldine on July 12, 2009 at 9:18 pm
Hi SandyC, Thanks Sandy, what a lovely comment!
Hi Shraddha, Glad you enjoyed it.
Hi Lissa, It is kind of dreamy, isn’t it?
Hi Joe, Thanks for stopping by dear!
Hi Gautami, I am so drawn to the water. I love to gaze at stones in lakes and rivers. Especially when it’s such nice clear water. May we never take that commodity for granted.
Hi Jim, Thanks again for the great prompt. Your video sounds great. I am sorry though, to read about your marital difficulties. Hugs…
Hi Tony, Thanks Tony, much appreciated.
Hi Edward, Nice to see you again and thank you!
Hi FP, Im so glad it did!
Hi Maggie, Great to see you again and thank you.
Hi Nathalie, Pun or not intended? Thank you for your cool compliment.
Hi Patois, I loved this prompt. It was easy to get inspired.
Hi Sue, I wish I was doing that, right now!
Thanks so much for your comments and visits, always appreciated, G
Posted by Geraldine on July 12, 2009 at 9:36 pm
Hi Nara, Your comment “snuck” in, while I was writing mine. Thanks for stopping in and welcome to OSI. G
Posted by Tumblewords on July 13, 2009 at 1:13 am
Peaceful, calming, inspirational…lovely!
Posted by Selma on July 13, 2009 at 2:35 am
I love looking at pebbles under water. For some reason it is incredibly soothing. I also like how they catch the sunlight and change colour. Just lovely!
Posted by DeLi on July 13, 2009 at 10:31 am
i always find healing in the water
Posted by Celine on July 13, 2009 at 12:01 pm
Lovely. I’d love to wade through that.
Posted by Sandy on July 13, 2009 at 8:18 pm
Just the kind of thoughts I want right now, after the June we had. Nice, Geraldine.
Posted by Jim on July 13, 2009 at 9:50 pm
Hey Geraldine, thanks for your concern about me and my ‘troubles.’ That divorece was the best thing that could ha ve happened to me except for the first one to have worked out. I have not regrets or sadness left at all, just for the first year or so until she remarried. I believe God sent Mrs. Jim to rescue me, from …
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Posted by Geraldine on July 14, 2009 at 3:37 pm
Hi Sue, What a lovely comment, thank you!
Hi Sel, I could imagine you doing this. Thanks for your continued support.
Hi DeLi, Me too!
Hi Celine, Sounds like a great idea.
Hi Sandy L, Glad you enjoyed this haiku Sandy.
Hi Jim, Ahhhh….now Ive got it. A previous marriage referred to. Glad things worked out so well the second time around.
Hugs and Happy Tuesday, G
Posted by Leo on July 14, 2009 at 4:20 pm
wonderful! loved it a lot!
good picture and words went with it!
Leo
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Posted by Carrie K on July 14, 2009 at 6:50 pm
Oh, fabulous! That’s the perfect haiku for that picture and this season.
Posted by zoya gautam on July 14, 2009 at 8:46 pm
beautiful!
Posted by patti on July 15, 2009 at 12:12 am
Love this- this is one of my favorite things to do in the summer at the lake. You captured it perfectly~
Posted by Geraldine on July 16, 2009 at 4:41 pm
Hi Leo, Welcome to MPP and thanks so much. Im glad you’ve joined us at OSI!
Hi Carrie, Thanks Carrie, your continued support means a lot.
Hi Zoya, Glad you liked this work.
Hi Patti, Welcome and thanks so much.
Hope you are all having a wonderful week, wherever you may be! G
Posted by Pearl on July 16, 2009 at 11:43 pm
nicely said. nice image too. one day we’ll get summer here too.