My Poetic Path

My journey…shared in poems, prose and photos.

Revisiting…Fading Memories

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It’s a cool, dreary Thanksgiving Day, here on Vancouver Island.

This poem and photo came to mind this afternoon, again and again.

Thinking of all those struggling with these heartbreaking issues. Sending hugs. ❤

Your efforts ARE appreciated.

I know….because my mom so poignantly told me that, when I needed to hear it most, many years ago. 

My Poetic Path

She sits in the diner, far from home.
Lunch rush over.
Blessed quiet restored.
It’s Tuesday, “her day”.
A crosstown bus ride, now a secret and special delight.
Away from the caring but claustrophobic family.
Still time to look back on happier days.
Trying to hold on to precious, fading memories.
 
The hours to savor, often still hopeful and good.
But too many others, a haze of uncertainty and doubt.
For now…
She will cautiously guard her fragile independence.
If only for a while longer.
Keeping them guessing.
Or so she hopes.
 
Where did the time go?
When did the children grow up to rise above her?
Knowing “what’s best”.
The mother becoming the child.
The child becoming the mother.
Trying to do their best..
Of that one thing, she is sure.
 
She grasps fervently and desperately to the time left.
To revel in these sacred moments alone.
Savoring her own thoughts.
Not willing to give…

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Author: Geraldine

I am a freelance writer, poet, artisan, avid book/product reviewer and award-winning cookbook author. I recently published the second volume of my new vegetarian cookbook series: The Groovy Green Kitchen (Volume 2): Simply, Super, Supper Soups and my inspirational, pro-active and fun book/eBook, all about aging well: Laughing AT the Grim Reaper! Gems of Wisdom for Aging Well. I am also the author of: The Groovy Green Kitchen (Volume 1): Weeknight Veggie Slow Cooker. Third Chapter, Second Chance (a mid-life romance). Not Just for Vegetarians: Delicious Homestyle Cooking, the Meatless Way and the poetry collections: Haiku Reflections: The Four Seasons (Volumes I, II and III) and My Poetic Path. These titles are available at all the Amazon sites. When I'm not writing or creating new recipes, I love to knit and crochet; usually with some "help" from feline friend, the yarn-loving Mr. Cheddar! 🐱 With Blogger, I also host my new author's site: Geraldine Helen Hartman and my product review blog: My Real Life Reviews. I hope you will visit often and enjoy all of my sites.😂 Thanks so much for stopping by. Wishing You a Happy Week and Namaste!

4 thoughts on “Revisiting…Fading Memories

  1. I do not feel this. I have no child so I am what I am, caring for myself and living how I want. I feel we all make our own decisions for as long as able and only have to allow others to assist us when we become unable to anymore. I am living life fully, filled and with love and hope and wonder.

  2. Wow this is poignant – and I relate in a way – a younger me – .. Anyway wonderful and I like the photo you added to the poem.

  3. Wonderful to read this poem again and the many comments from the first time. You’ve captured the emotions so well. So many people face challenges like this, with a family member or with themselves. So well written.

  4. Sounds like you are in a good place and state of mind Rose, that’s wonderful. But so many people do face these challenges, every day. This was a poem that has resonated with many of my readers.

    Thanks Sandy. When I found this photo, I thought it was perfect to go with my words.

    Thanks Joe, I was moved, reading all the comments again from the original post.

    Hugs to all. We all need lots of them.❤

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