This one is for you Teri.
Thanks for all the beautiful daisies that you share.
I’m still working on and reading about Tanka poetry. It can be deceptively simple.
Unlike a haiku, tanka poems should actually be one continuous thought, written in 5 lines. Syllables of: 5, 7,5,7,7.
If you’ve never tried writing a tanka poem, you might enjoy it. It’s can be challenging.
And a lot of fun too, with the right subject to start with! 😉
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June 14, 2011 at 1:22 pm
Oh Geraldine, this is a beautiful tanka! Just beautiful. And even more beautiful because you wrote it for me. You make me so happy.. Thank you so much. sniffsniff.
BIG HUGS and more BIG HUGS.
June 14, 2011 at 5:58 pm
I like this tanka and this photo. Daisies do brighten up a dark day, any day really.
June 15, 2011 at 4:33 am
lovely tanka and dedication to daisy Teri
June 15, 2011 at 8:50 am
Lovely and who else than the queen of daisies deserves this tanka.
So sweet of you!
And yes daisies brightens the day!
June 15, 2011 at 2:13 pm
Hi Teri, You are so welcome my friend. When I saw these lovely yellow daisies in a planter on Monday, you were the first person who came to mind. The tanka followed!!! I know you love tanka poems too.
Hi Joe, It was kind of dark sky on Monday wasn’t it? These stood out, with their brilliant yellow.
Hi Suki, I love your name! Thank you for stopping by and your kind words.
Hi Marianne, She certainly does! I love your black kitty on your blog btw, so sweet.
Happy Wednesday, G 🙂
June 15, 2011 at 2:15 pm
Oops, I pushed the “like” button above by mistake! Shameless self-promotion!! Of course I like this post, but I didn’t mean to push that button LOL :<)
June 15, 2011 at 2:37 pm
Just seeing this tanka with it’s beautiful flowers cheered me!
It is sunny here today, a bonus really, it was supposed to be cloudy.
June 15, 2011 at 7:13 pm
I’ve never tried a Tanka. Very interesting. We all love Teri! Queen of the daisies!!! 🙂
Beautiful poem for her!